Thursday, February 26, 2009

Time is Ticking

This is intended for audiences between 13 and 18.The purpose of this piece is to observe someone and form a story or make conclusions based on what is seen on the outside from a third person point of view.

Veronica is sitting in the passenger seat of her 1999 Dodge Caravan which is perfectly parked in front of a building lobby. She is wearing blue tight jeans, a white short sleeve shirt and a thin dark blue jacket to go with her baby blue flip-flops. She is waiting for her husband to come down so that they could leave for the party they have been planning to go to for over a week now. They had already been on their way until her husband realized he had forgotten his drivers licence at home and they had to quickly drive back to get it. Both her and her husband just moved to Canada about eight months ago and have lived in that building since. Judging by her attire and posture, she looked no more then twenty-two years old and quite wealthy as well. As I glimpsed into the back seat I could see two tennis rackets and a couple of large black binders. Judging by these items I believe that her job would have something to do with accounting or business and some of her hobbies would be playing tennis with her husband. From her facial expression we could distinguish that she was quite happy but there were some glimpses of agony in her countenance. I though this was due to the fact that her husband was taking quite a long time upstairs thus making them late for the party. Both she and her husband have all their relatives living down in the United States of America. That left them living in Toronto with there three children; one who was a boy while the other two girls.

1 comment:

  1. Excellent use of description, and diction (i.e attire, posture). Try to make your story flow a more because it more of an observation than a story. However it is a great post!

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